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maireadinish ([personal profile] maireadinish) wrote in [community profile] vulcanreforged 2010-04-28 11:09 am (UTC)

Re: Those Left Behind

Thank you so much for writing this, I've been desperate for Pike/Sarek; I think that they much in common.

I think that you handled the prompt adeptly. The tone is as subdued as needs be for being so close in time to their losses, and is also quite in character.

I especially like the touches about Amanda, what she would think and do and choose. That was really nice.

And I agree, I think that while it feels complete, there is room for more if you so choose.

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